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Old 01-19-2005   #3 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by cuffedlinks
...So what the heck is wrong with that one....??
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Now, just my humble opinion, Cuff...but do the word "verbose" mean anything to you? Mind you, it works for Michener.
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